Wednesday, February 14, 2007

since it valentines...

Winter Moonlight

The snow, so peaceful and serene,
caressed by the soft moonlight
,gave magical feelings to the night.
The soft blue glow,
the lovers' words that then did flow,their lips closer and closer
until, locked in the throes
of a passionate embrace,
he decided to express his feelings,
to keep her safe.
He whispered softly,
his words like music to her ears,
"I Love You,"
and her response the same,
heard like the gentle breeze,
"And I, love you, forever."
That was the night they promised
to be together through everything,
each to care for the other when old and gray
A lovers' pact
the most likely to last.

awww but this poem is soo sweet

2 comments:

qdee said...

hmmm, sweet poem...a little naive, considering lovers pacts are often compromised by some complicated parent issues or jealousy which culminates in a sad love song and the girl slitting her wrists.lol. been watching too many bollywood movies.

MaD_HatteR said...

"and then he starts a 9-5 job. It pays the bills, but never gets her that diamond ring she's always wanted...They have a child...He's hardly at home anymore...between his work, golf on sundays and nights out with his friends, she is forced into single parentship...and one day he tells her to take her child and leave...She asks him ever so dearly, "do u remember our pact dear?"...His response "*Burp*, wat u say to me woman?! Get outta here!"...The sad reality of a bond initiated with pure intentions...